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 calling Open in new Window. [ASR]
"There’s a hole in my chest from the things that I did and the gun in my hand."
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Greetings, Zeit!
This is a really dark piece about vampirism (I believe), and your words say it all. Bu then again, I guess any poetry about vampirism is going to be dark. *Vamp*
I'm no expert on poetry, but I do like free verse, and this is good. Great spelling and grammar, but I'm kind of on the fence with that line about believing in Christ, though. But that's just my opinion, of course.
That last line was perfect.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Zeit, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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