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Greetings again, C.M.!
First off, let me say that you have a very strong grasp of writing skills. Your prose and style seem really professional. That said, this piece is excellent!
I was a little curious at 1st as to how you were going to turn that poet's verse about the beauty and grace of a fly fisherman around, but you were right on it.
Now why didn't I see that?
I love that line: 'That would too closely match the behavior of a sane man.' *Rolling*
And not only did you refute the poet's 'vision', but you did so with some very valid points. I'd never considered the fisherman 'mercifully' releasing his catch after he's exhausted it after a several minute fight! And this one is smoother than 'a crystal clear blue mountain lake.' *Laugh*
As I mentioned earlier, I hope you get your bio set up. You have a wonderful sense of humor, and I'm curious as to know how old you are.
This whole piece was great, C.M., and I'd bet that you could get it published somewhere!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! It was a pleasure to read, and again, welcome to WdC!

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