Thank you so much, Lostwordsmith, for the privilege of reviewing one of your poems. This Christmas Moment in June is, indeed, a most blessed gift!

Overall Impression: "The Shaker Tune" lends itself quite handily to anything with regards to Jesus, The Christ. The first line of "Simple Gifts," "'Tis the gift to be simple, 'tis the gift to be free..." walks hand-in-hand with the first line of your Christmas song, "It's a season of giving, It' s a season of peace,..." for if we are truly simple people walking in freedom, then we will give freely from a peaceful heart of simplicity.

Suggestions: Please, keep doing more of the same. New words to old standard Christmas carols or new Christmas carols from the tunes of well-known songs are always a pleasure and an experience that I will always treasure.

Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar: I didn't notice any issues with the structure of English rules in this song rewrite.

What I Like: You wrote a Christmas song from one of my all-time favorite tunes. Nicely done! WRITE ON!