Personal Impression: This poem beautifully tells its tale of a girl and the sand castle and most important, her caring father.
Tone & Mood: Gentle mood, positive tone.
Rhyme, Form & Flow: This read well to the ear, flowing smoothly and the rhyming fit well with the poem.
Emotional Impact: I was moved with compassion for the girl's loss of her creation, and again with joy for the love shown to her by her father.
Grammar/Punctuation: No corrections needed.

Thank you for sharing this poem!

Write On!
Deb



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