I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible.

My overall impression of your work: I'm only a judge in the event of a tie but I'd say you have a winning poem here. It meets all senryu requirements and I like your epiphany at the end.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the "aha" moment at the end. Many writers miss those.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing.

Closing remarks: thank you and good luck.



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