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Game of Thrones  (13+) Closed until further notice... #456789 by Gaby

Overall Impression: Oh how true the words of this poem are. The people who think they are better, or the people we feel are better. Regardless of the scenario, there is a name that will cause us all to break. Whether it is of love lost or pain or the death of a loved one.. We are all human and no matter the image we put out there or the way we are perceived, we all have a memory that will cause us to hit or knees. I was impressed to see this was inspired by a friend here on the site. What a lovely tribute to honor that person's feelings or thoughts.

Poetic Tool Box: The freestyle flow for this poem works well. Is an easy read with an obvious message.

Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: I did not take note of any errors in your poem.

Parting Comments: Inspiration comes in many forms, I was not surprised to find this poem in your port as I have read a wide variety of items from you. What I am surprised by and impressed with at the same time is how versatile you are. You have impressive poetry, short stories, flash fiction, essays, and more; yet, you do exceedingly well with all of it. I hope you will be encouraged to keep seeking out things that keep you writing! Job well done!

You responded to this review 09/05/2017 @ 11:59am EDT

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