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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
Nineteen years old and giving herself to this kind of testing. Now that's pretty scary to think that someone wouldn't feel the need to keep plugging on and see what life does have to offer. Obviously, the loneliness was too much for Susan to bear, and now she is stuck with the decision she's made.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
The letter Susan leaves behind in her journal is almost haunting, especially because she has no idea what will happen next. That really came across and she wondered about her situation and what the taking that pill would do to her. Her curiosity got the better of her as she hopes she will get psychic powers and being able to read minds.

PLOT~
Susan, having no family and very minimal friends decides to sign up for a science experiment where she will have super power abilities. There is an open ending here, leaving the reader wondering what happened to Susan.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT~
Susan, the very young woman and a loner waiting for more testing at the lab. Her journal entry was very forthcoming as she wrote down her thoughts as they have asked her to.


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