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 |  | Toxic  [13+] Response to an anonymous romantic drabble prompt I received.  |
| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Creeper Of The Realm  OVERALL IMPRESSION - I love that a prompt sent your way really inspired you to step out of your comfort zone and write, and what a fantastic story it was. You had great emotion as she went through why she loved him, and why he's toxic. I was sitting on the edge of my seat wondering how far she'd let things go and you didn't disappoint. WHAT I LIKED BEST - Everything. I was drawn in right from the beginning and you easily kept my attention right through to the end. I think I liked the strength and presence of mind she had while she was with him, all of the reminders of who he really is. PLOT~ Ex's meet up again. She still loves him and cannot seem to stop herself from going to meet him. Once there, he breaks her heart again, and it isn't long until she realizes all that he is and why they are no longer together. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT~ Definite character growth here with her showing up at his door to see him, her heart still longing for him. As they talk and all of those old feelings are stirred, it also triggers all of the reasons they parted ways, to begin with. Great emotion. It's very relatable as well. This is a piece to be proud of.   
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