Letter Home to a Veteran [E] My personal heartfelt letter home to a very special veteran. Always loved, and my "hero". |
Hi Angel_Eyes, I am reviewing your story "Letter Home to a Veteran" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC. ♥ Dear Angel, my heart bled for you as I read your letter to your husband. I am so sorry for your loss, but I thank you for sharing yourself with us here on wdc. I felt your emotion through this letter, and I can almost guarantee that your Doug hears you. He sees you, and he still loves you and the girls so very much. ♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This letter was written well. ♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors. ♥ Overall: This letter was emotion laden, and it actually took me a minute to process the emotion here. Things of this nature tend to leave me drained emotionally, which is a good and bad thing. Thank you so much for sharing your husband with us, for sharing his memory. I enjoyed the glimpse that you allowed us into your soul. This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely. House Greyjoy - "Game of Thrones"
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