Hi Books and horse lover, I am reviewing you poem "Deaths Feat" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This poem was the very essence of death, it was spooky, gloomy and full of doom and dread. I really enjoyed this poem in all of its emotional glory. I am happy that you chose such a tough. subject to write about. The person within story while he didn't necessarily want to die, partly because of his loved ones, he seemed okay with the fact that maybe it was just his time to do so. This

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I do not have any suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors. Your poem seems to be well written.

♥ Overall: This might have been a gloomy poem, but I could see the light within. For example, I could see how much the dying (I'm assuming) man cared for his family, because his family was one of his last thoughts before he tumbled into that great abyss. Thank you so much for writing this!

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

House Greyjoy - "Game of Thrones"