Hello Gabriella I'm jree03. From the name from my handle I'm going to assume you know why I'm here. (Hint: To spoil you with a Greyjoy review.)

What I enjoyed: I enjoyed the how the poetry sounded and what it felt like. All of the details made me shiver wanting to know more. Feeling the snow beneath my feet. breathing in the cold, fresh, crisp air. Having snowflakes fall on my face. Seeing the cottage in the middle of a winter storm it made me shudder. The description of the old man in the cottage made me wanna get up and run. I love how you made this a free verse poem. Free verse poetry is my favorite kind of poetry because you get to express yourself without the hassle of a rhyme.
What I didn't enjoy: The poem to me just didn't make sense 'cause there were periods in weird places to me. Other than that It still flowed pretty well.

Over all summary: After all this over all it was an amazingly, glorious poem that told a story about the feelings of Winter, and all that can happen in this wonderful, winter wonderland. If you can't tell I LOVED YOUR POEM! Any who Keep on Writing.
Yours Truly,
jree03
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