Hey turtle moon-dohi, I am reviewing your poem "Or So You Said" on behalf of games of thrones here on WDC.

Rhythm/Rhyme: This is a free verse poem, your flow is tight. Your emotions came through. I felt every word that you wrote and I saw your relationship go from innocent to something unrecognizable. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Imagery: I loved the imagery that you portrayed. I loved the whole tone and feel of this poem.

Impressions: I did not expect such strong emotion to come from this poem, but it did! My favorite lines are: "A word that continued to be bound in mystery;
a relationship based on hope and debased in doubt."

I felt those words down to my heart, because I've been there. I've felt that the words spoken weren't being followed by actions. Thank you so much for sharing such an emotional story with us.

This review was written freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely.


Note: I am writing on my iPad and my spelling may be slightly off, please excuse any typos


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