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| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Creeper Of The Realm  OVERALL IMPRESSION - Great job with your Daily Flash entry. I really loved what you did with the prompt. WHAT I LIKED BEST - How both were down on the opposite sex, and yet there was something brewing between them. PLOT~ Harry stumbles out of the bar, swearing off women. He's tried everything to have some kind of relationship but second dates are hard to come by, and even those don't pan out. He decides to sit down for a minute. Just as he closes his eyes to relax a minute, a woman trips over his legs and he tries to prevent her from falling. Ann is swearing off men too, drunk as well and takes a seat beside him. The two share words and then Harry suggests they go for coffee. CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~ Harry is trying to mend his broken heart after being dumped. Ann too is finding it difficult to meet a good man. The two seem to hit it off and Ann asks him back to her place. Good job describing their drunken states, especially Harry as he sits under the street light and finds comfort there before Ann shows up. You made it very easy to picture this all playing out. DIALOG~ I loved the conversation these two had, hating on the opposite sex and then laughing about it.   
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