Hi Jezebel, I am reviewing your short story "Author, Interrupted" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC. ♥ Very very nice! I now know how to come up with fleeting words, have vigorous sex! This short story is about a woman who is an author. One day while she is writing she does what writers commonly do, have to think of a word or words that do not sound too trite, and as she's writing story she becomes hot and bothered, her husband soon helps her with that predicament and the author finds relief😋 afterwards because she discovers the word she needed. ♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short was written really well. I do not have any specific suggestions to offer you at this time. ♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors. ♥ Overall: This was a really sexy story. I loved the teasing between the husband and wife. I wanted to see a little more roughness from the husband, but that is purely for personal reasons. I enjoyed reading this story. This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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