This was an amazing article! The title is what first caught my intererest. Knowing that this was written for Project Write World, I knew it would be a cultural piece on India. The title is sort of light, but when I understood the deeper meaning of that title it weighted heavy on my heart. It is one of those aspects that always sticks with you. When I see a balloon, I will forever see that barefooted girl and her story.

This article shows the sad truth of the cast system in India, but ends with the hope for change present in newer generations. It could serve as a literary write, advocating for change.

You don't include this in your article, but those in the United States contribute to this sad system, encouraging prostitution of these young girls. Sadly, many travel to places like India because the can buy the sexual services of children. It is horrifying to me to think of this being the norm of existance for a child.

Your explanation of modern generations gives me hope that this is in the process of changing. No child deserves such a fate.

I found it interesting how you explained the way of thinking being a comfort to those who are in poverty. It encourages some heavy contemplation. I can see how the acceptance of where one is as being a punishment can serve as a comfort. When one realizes that it is an injustice and wrong, I imagine they would be less accepting of their plite and angry.


Overall excellent writing! You even include some great resources to learn more. Thank you for sharing a part of your culture to educate others.





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .