Hello, AllSmiles,

This is a very emotional, thought provoking poem. It's almost like a bunch of different poems in one.

I love the imagery you start out with, running until the land runs out of space; flying across the water; meeting that friend. I hope you have some dear friends to share life with. With a name like AllSmiles I imagine that you do!

My favorite line of this poem is: "I want to run and run till the land runs out of space."

The middle of the poem makes me feel sad.

The end makes me think about counting my blessings. Maybe that wasn't your intention but that's how it is for me.

Your spelling and grammar are on point and the poem flows well.

Thank you for your encouraging reviews!

I hope this was encouraging for you too. I enjoyed your poem and echo your blessing. May God bless you! May He bless your friendships and all you do too!

All the best,
Phyllis


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