Hello AllSmiles,

You wrote a very thought provoking, engaging poem.

I liked the rhythm of it; I thought it flowed well and the rhyming complemented the writing. I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors.

Most importantly, I enjoyed reading it. "I often ponder of the heavens" too.

And, like you, I love the clouds and sky. Though there is a lot to see around here in addition to that, I always seem to take a lot of photos of the clouds and sky. They are always riveting.

I hope you enjoy every minute of your day!

May God bless all you do and say!
Phyllis

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