Hello and good evening. I am Grateful Jess and I'll be reviewing Actually The Glass Is Always Full. Please remember these are only my opinions, feel free to take advice with a grain of salt.

Wow! I absolutely loved your essay and as some one who is currently depressed, I needed this. I work two jobs and I start my full-time job early in the morning. One morning I might have to watch the sun rise, even if it's during the weekend. I remember the happiness that brought me when I was a little girl.

I didn't think this sounded like a lecture at all. It was helpful and gentle. I also found no grammatical or mechanical errors, however, it wouldn't hurt to go over this again to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.

Keep writing and keep sharing joy!