Hello!

I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.

Initial Impression: Yes! There is magic all around us . the sound of magic sooths us. It heals our pains. This magic travel everywhere with our words. I like the images you have painted here.

Theme and Creativity:Your rhyming scheme is beautiful.

Favorite line: “There is magic all around us
The way flowers bloom and children develop
If only one wishes to see
How bumblebees fly and horses gallop”

Suggestions: I found some spelling mistakes . In the first stanza “Wether they are read or heard” should be whether
2nd stanza 2nd line “Conveing” should be Conveying. And 2nd stanza 4th line “listeining” should be listening.

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Happy Writing!

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