Hi,

I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for February"The WDC Angel Army" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.


This is a good piece of write. The title caught my eyes.

First, I feel sorry to hear your aunt death.

I love this poem because it captures something poignant – and true.

When a loved one dies an emotional feelings surrounded our mind. Which reflects in your poem. You express your sorrow in deep, powerful ways. Crafted beautifully with your words. For example “Our sorrows will turn tomorrow’s into sweet memories for a life time remembering all the joyous moments hilarious and wisdom that they leave behind as their legacy”

Suggestion : I found some of the lines of your poem are too long. I learned that The length of the lines and the line breaks are important.

May your aunt’s soul rest upon in peace.
It is well written thoughtful piece. I enjoyed it reading. Thank you for sharing!



Mina



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