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 Time Open in new Window. [E]
First poem in a while~
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi,

I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for February"The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.. I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.


This is a good piece of write. The title caught my eyes.

This is a good poem. It is so true of life today. Even little children today do not have time to stand and stare, to look at nature because of their busy schedule. I like the words. I like the images you have painted.

My favorite lines

“Will we have time?
If we stand here waiting,
for the roar of springtime
is coming in full swing.â€

It is well written thoughtful piece. I enjoyed it reading. Thank you for sharing!

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