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Hi,

I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for February""The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.†.I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.

You have written a very good piece of story about black dog, I liked the way you told the story with paragraph breaks. you described the characteristics of black dogs beautifully.

I learned “This black dog had a rough beginning with people who treated her badly. Because of that, she needs a lot of assurance that she’s accepted and adored.†Not only the black dogs are aggressive. I think every dog behave rough at the beginning. Sadly some of the people believe that black dogs are associated with all negatives.

Dogs are the most loyal animals in this world. I have once a brown dog.
This is an amazing story. Keep writing.

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