Hello DoubleTearedEmoji



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A good poem written with a lot a sad emotions. The rhythm is a little choppy in areas. Good use of punctuation. The title is good. It's catchy, pulling in the reader.
To make u proud Spell out you, you're not texting on a phone.

A little polish and you would have a great poem.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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