Hello Sabine



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Welcome to WDC.

Lots of color, good rhythm. Each line flows into the next line nicely. Adding in some punctuation would help the flow. Nice form and good word selection. I'm not a big fan of the title, but if it works for you that's all that matters.

I like the last stanza. Knowing the crystals are always there is a reassuring fact when I've lost my way.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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