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Hello Ms. Connie

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I like the message. This poem has good rhythm and each line flows nicely into the next line. Good structure and word selection. And good use of punctuation. The title works well with this piece.

My only suggestion would be to make it a little longer.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*

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