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*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: This Poem is really wonderful and emotional. I like the simplicity of this poem.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity:I like the little rhyming.

*Pencil*Favourite lines: From promises made-
til we lay in the grave,
We all live to say
" Momâ€

*FlowerB* Overall: I love this beautiful poem. You penned down all your thoughts so beautifully in this poem about mother.

I enjoyed reading this poem.


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