Hi,

I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for February"The WDC Angel Army" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.{/b}

I just read this beautiful poem. I like how your poem starts with onomatopoeia words. This poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. You beautifully painted the images of cemetery with some good words choice. The images are vivid and artictic.
“A peaceful wind gently rustles through the grass,”

“Darkness encompasses the tall stones” “Her white dress drapes over the blades of grass
Leading spectators away” All the snapshots beautifully expressed in words.

It is well written thoughtful piece. I enjoyed it reading. Thank you for sharing!



Mina



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