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This is a beautiful twisted classic fairy tale.

You have good imaginary. You mix together the great characters “ Bella” “ Anastasia” “Ana” “Drizzella”. I think it is unique and clever idea.

Cinderella is one of my favorite fairy tale. The way you wrote this keeps me reading it from the beginning to the end. I especially like the dialogues. It flowed beautifully between the characters.

Beautifully told and written. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

It's pleasure to know someone like you. Keep writing!


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