Hi!

I am sending you a review of your story, "My Mother Came Back"  for the Review Challenge for February. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you.

The title caught my eye.

FIRST IMPRESSION:This is good story. Beautifully told and written. I like the way you wrote this story.

THE STORY:This story is about a 13 year kid Rain whose mother left her when he was just 6. She worked in his dad's coffee shop, La Coffee. One day while Rain was doing her homework she heard a quiet tapping on her window. …

SETTING: In a modern time.

CHARACTERS:All the characters well developed. I like the character Rain.

DIALOG: Dialogue floated normally between the characters .

OVERALL IMPRESSION: Wonderful story. I enjoyed it reading.

Keep Writing!

Mina.

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