Hello HWinB.C.


Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest {/b}

Congratulations on your Open House.
This is an Angel Review.



I like the idea of a crow and squirrel being friends and tag teaming the house cat. It is a cute story that I can relate to.



A well written story. The plot moves at a good pace. The description of the setting is great. I could see the story unfold as I read. Great job with the character description. Even though it is a short story you added in good description of your characters. Enough to give an idea of what they like, but not to much to slow your story.

The title works well with this piece. It's catchy and pulls the reader in. It adds perspective to the story and lives up to my expectations.

A good ending, it left me wondering what other entertainment could be find on the patio.



I have no suggestions to offer.



A well written story.
Thank you for sharing your story. Keep on writing!


Gypsy Ann

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