Hi!

I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for February"The WDC Angel Army" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.


This is a good piece of write. The title caught my eyes.

This is a good poem. Yes, love should be like that! Your poem has lovely romantic thought inside every line. I could feel the sense of sadness woven in your poem. I like the way you put your feelings into words.

Favorite lines: “and that it doesn't hurt me
i miss you teasing me”

Suggestion: I think you need to capitalize all the first letters of your poem. For example “i still wear your shirt i say i don't care” should be “I”
It is beautiful poem. I enjoyed it reading. Thank you for sharing! Keep Writing!



Mina



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