Hi Matthew!

I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for February"The WDC Angel Army" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.


This is a good piece of write. Beautifully told about despair and depression.

Inner fear disrupts our activities. I like the lines of your piece
"Wallow not in fake remorse
I was always set upon this course
Tears will dry,Smiles disappear
I could not defeat my inner fear"

Suggestion: In second and last stanza you need one space after the punctuation mark “comma”.

It is well written thoughtful piece. I enjoyed it reading. Thank you for sharing!



Mina



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