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 | THE FROG MAN  [13+] A man's murdered best friend comes back to life, changed; to help him exact revenge.  |
| (4.5)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Greetings Brent, and happy 1st 'birthday' on here! I read your disclaimer at the beginning of this, and personally I don't think it's too bad just as it is. Maybe a little polishing up, but otherwise it's pretty good. And does show a lot of good imagination! The idea of Drano killing those children would be enough to pi** anybody off, so it's no wonder Gage and Philip wanted to see him gone. And having Philip return as the 'frog man' (re Kermit the frog) was a cool way of going about that. One thing I'm not too sure about is Drano's daughter Ariel (the dream mermaid). I know she has a role in this, but that dream sequence seemed a tad confusing. It's understable, but I think the telling of it could use some work. Great spelling and grammar, and that ending was simply 'to die for'!   Kee ponw ritin gon, Brent, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!
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