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 | The Everflowing Stream  [E] A short poem about my thoughts on time.  |
| (5.0)| Hi! I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. This is good thoughtful poem. I like the way you wrote this. I liked the concept as well. The images are vivid and artistic that keeps the readers to read it at the end. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you. The poem: In this poem, you told about time. you said that time never stays. Beautifully started with the lines “I ponder oft this currency called Time That spends itself e’en as I write this rhyme.†Yes, time always runs and runs without stoppage. It never waits for anyone. It is so precious than gold. Which you told with these lines “How best to spend this precious, waning gold; It glitters best in passion of sweet labor, We should the value and respect the importance of time every single moment. We should remember if time once lost it never retrieve. I like the little rhyming of your poem and the meaning it has. I sometimes find it difficult to rhyming my poems. Though I am not expert but It seems you have used punctuations marks where they are needed. Overall: Your poem floated beautifully. It tells we need to use the time properly. Beautifully told and written. Thanks for sharing your story with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you. Keep writing!  Mina        ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 02/19/2018 @ 12:09am EST