Hi!
I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work"My First Public Writing Experience" .

Good start. I like the simplicity of your writing and the way you put down your feelings.

I too is not a professional writer. But I like writing because I think it is best way to express ourselves, organize our thoughts and emotions and ideas with others.

My second language is English. I keep writing everyday to be master in writing. Now, I feel that my writing in English becomes good after coming here.
I found some good points in your writing “But whatever it is, Im kind of feeling happy when im writing this. Even Im nervous i also feel happy and blissful.”

Suggestion: I think you need corrections some of the places for example:” When i start writing my heart always felt a relief that i never feeled.” Capitalized all the I’s and otherwise it is wonderful.

I understood this was written from personal experience and it looks great. I like the thought woven in this piece. Beautifully told and written. Thanks for sharing your story with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.

Keep writing!



Mina


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