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 Fangirls: A Guide Open in new Window. [E]
Everything you need to know about fangirls. Disclaimer: I'm not an actual proffesional.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, Carmen Briggs (Miranda, Missy)!
This is a neat informational piece about 'fangirls', and since I had no idea what that was, I wanted to check this out. Personally, I was thinking they were something like the 'valley girls' of yesteryear, but I was soooo off the mark! *Laugh*
I do know about fanfiction though, so this obsessiveness isn't really all that new. But I guess each new generation will always have their own thing.
Great spelling and grammar, but I did spot a few niggles (sorry to be so picky):
'..to make fanatsy become reality' (fantasy)
'...because of characaters' (characters-also misspelled in the following line)
Otherwise, not bad. And to be honest, I'm so glad they're not anything like 'valley girls'!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Carmen, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-For only being only 13, I think it's great that you're taking an interest in writing! Hang with it!
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