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 | One Misspelling Intended  [E] On catching trains and change. Spoken word. Political. Fun.  |
| (4.0)| Hi . This is a review from Mastiff .  After reading "One Misspelling Intended" I have the following comments to offer.  First impression: I knew when I first read through it I would need to have at least one or more reads to gather what you wanted me to know. Things That Might Make It Better: The line "Funny isn't it." is technically a question. It leaves me to wonder if you're actually telling me, and if so, why not use a statement? Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar: I'm sure you realize "beheading" isn't a punctuation error, but grammatical. It works, though. I read right over it the first time and had to go back and catch it.  Things I Like:"Don't take me literally." Is very well placed, trying to figure out what the piece meant to you was important, but that lead me to try and figure out what it could mean for me.  Final Comments Very well set up with the use of the three words deferred, disposed, and referred. It created a tone for your work. Mastiff   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/21/2018 @ 12:30am EST