Hello Vivienne



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Welcome yo WDC.

An interesting poem. Full on emotions. Good imagery. Each line flows nicely into the next. It has good rhythm. However, using punctuation would help the flow and rhythm.

It sounds melodic. It also carries a message of betrayal. It definitely has depth. This piece has both beauty and power to it. I didn't notice any cliches. Good job at writing this poem.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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