Hi!

I just read this poem.

TITLE:I like this nature poem and the title as well.

IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images you have sketched here. The descriptions are well written and very vivid and artistic.

RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear(a.a.b.b).
I like rhyming poems. The tone I found this poem is cheerful and soothing.

RHYTHM:Your poem has good rhythm. It flowed beautifully like the floating sea.

STRUCTURE & FORM:you have beautiful thoughts inside every line.

THEME: I enjoy the scents, colors and sounds of the this poem. It reflects the poets love of ocean. Sea water delights us and inspires us which reflects in your poem. I like the descriptions.

OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
Keep writing!

Mina.

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