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 BE KIND ENOUGH TO CARE Open in new Window. [E]
Appreciate the presence of all thos around you.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work"BE KIND ENOUGH TO CARE" Open in new Window..

*Butterflyb*This is good poem. I like the point "to be kind and do good without having expectations."

In this article, you told to appreciate the presence of people around us. We the human have many responsibilities toward others. We are fortunate that we are living in a time of technology. We can help people around us.

Sadly, values of co-existence eroding fast creating spaces for selfishness. You truly said “Be there for people when they feel lonely, let them have a crying shoulder when they need it”. Yes, It cost nothing but to give great pleasure in one’s mind.

You penned down all your thoughts so beautifully. I like the inspirational words of this piece.

Overall: a thoughtful piece. It speaks about humanity. It said we need compassion towards each other to make this world better place.

Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
Keep writing!

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