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 | heartbroken  [13+] I've been heartbroken for a while now.  |
| (4.0)| Hi there, Bellabee. I don't know how old you are, but I have a strong feeling you're a teenager, or pretty close to that anyway. I want to let you know that everybody has feelings like this, not just younger people. A heart is a very tender thing, and once it's broken it might take a lot of time before it can be mended. BUT time does heal, and there will be other people in your life, and years from now you might look back on this episode and not even remember his name! You have really good and smart friends telling you to write your feeling down, and as a published writer myself, I want you to know that doing this really is cathartic, and it does help, if even just a little bit. You might not realize that now, but it does. My suggestion would be to try to get back in the dating game. To use an old cliché, 'there's a lot other fish in the sea'! There's quite a few punctuation and capitalization problems in this, but I don't think you cared about those when you wrote this, so I won't point them out. You got your point across and your feelings out, and that's all that really matter for a piece like this. I sincerely you hope feel better, Bellabee. I might be a total stranger, but at least I'm a stranger who cares! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your biography set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PPS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" to get a feel of Writing.Com and introduce yourself to the community!
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