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 | Love's a Racket  [13+] Love, tennis, marriage, keeping score - a match made in heaven? Twisted Tale Flash Fiction  |
| (5.0)| Bon jour, J Sheehy! For such a short flash fiction piece, I thought this was great! The whole piece flowed wonderfully, the spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), and your fictional love for not only your fictional husband but your beloved 'Wilson' tennis racket really showed through, at least until you reached your forties. Things obviously got pretty nasty after that. But what really stood out was that surprise ending! Bravo! No woman, fictional or not, should have to abide by abuse of any kind, so I was literally clapping when this fictional husband of your fictional protagonist got his comeuppance! 'Game, set and match' to you!  You couldn't have ended this any better!Kee ponw ritin gon, J Sheehy, and welcome to WdC! If you love to write, then you're going to love it here, as I'm sure your real husband has already told you  . So I won't go into my usual spiel about where to go and what you should do as a Newbie!Well, I will say this: If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Please Review Page or The Plug Page under Community on the left hand side.
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