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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I was drawn in to read your poem because of the title, it's enticing. There is a good rhythm to your poem. And each line flows nicely into the next line.

If you use a comma or any other punctuation you don't have to capitalize the first word in the next line. And I don't get where the afterlife comes into play.

This is a well written poem. I like "rain tip taps on the windows". It just sounds cool.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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