Hello Amelia

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Good title, it works well for this poem. It lives up to my expectations of the poem. Good rhythm. It moves at a face pace. Each line flows nicely into the next line making it easy to understand.

This is an interesting poem that has a message. I feel there is a lot of power and emotions added into this poem. It has depth.

Put up a wall, it's dark and lonely inside,
Welcome to my world, step on in I'll show you more.
I can relate.

As a Survivor of the past, I can Survive the future.
Yes you can.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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