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 Nature's Lulluby Open in new Window. [E]
The first short story I've ever done, made around two weeks ago.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work"BE KIND ENOUGH TO CARE" Open in new Window..

*Butterflyb* Good start. I like the beautiful nature picture you have painted. I am now reviewing it and I do hope you find something that is interesting and helpful to you.

This is a very sweet story about a girl who used to come beside a lake with her mother. There is nothing more beautiful than being with nature. It helps people feel happier and more connected which reflected in your story. You truly said “her sweet lullaby resounding through my ears.”

You penned down all your thoughts so beautifully.

Suggestion: If you make it a bit longer, it would be interesting. This is just one person opinion.

Overall: I enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
Keep writing!

Mina.
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