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Greetings, Caerlynn!
For such a short piece, I thought this was pretty good. The idea of your father being a police officer and having him pull you over while you were taking your driving test is pretty wild. It almost makes me wonder if the instructor and her father didn't have that planned out ahead of time, just so she wouldn't get her license. Hmmm...
The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), and the whole piece flowed smoothly. And that ending was perfect: 'straight' through the light! *Laugh*
Very well done, Caerlynn! I'm not sure if this won The Writer's Cramp, but it still looks like a winner to me!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC, although I'm pretty sure I've reviewed you before and said that exact same thing! Regardless, you won't be a Newbie anymore in about 2 weeks! *Bigsmile*

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