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 | OnePercent  [13+] Self-Help for villains  |
| (4.5)| Greetings, Virgilio (Javier)! For claiming to 'write hope and fantasy', I'm not too sure about the 'hope' idea, unless your hope is the same as that of Satan's! In fact, this could almost pass as part of Satan's manifesto!  OK. I realize it's for a Super-Villain, and with that being the case, then you've got a good outline or plan for your character to follow. And I'm sure you could add to it as time goes on. I noticed you have it under 'psychology', and that's appropriate; there are some who might read this and think you're a little psycho if they didn't read the first line! But there's also people who think I'm a little warped for some of the horror pieces I've written (I've actually been accused of this, I kid you not!), so who's to say who's psycho? I'm not sure where the 'political' genre comes into this, but that's beside the point. I'm guessing you have plans to incorporate this into a larger piece about a real Super-Villain, right? From what I've read so far, you seem to be a pretty good writer, so if that is your plan, I encourage you to follow through with it! Anyway, good job. The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), and your villainous ideas were clear and to the point! My only suggestion would be to expand on this, because there's always room for improvement!  Kee ponw ritin gon, Virgilio, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your biography set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PPS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" to get a feel of Writing.Com and introduce yourself to the community!
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