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 | The Beast and the Light  [E] A quick note about her.  |
| (4.5)| Greetings once again, BSbyBS! I realize you have this under 'inspirational', but it took quite a journey to get there! And I'm still not sure if 'inspirational' is the right genre for this. 'Dark' seems a little more appropriate, at least for the majority of it. You did a good job of describing what I think a crazy person might be hearing and/or going through inside his head, and it was a little scary, even for me! You talk about this 'beast' and this 'voice' that keeps pulling at you (I'm only now starting to find out that voice is 'her'). But after reading it a 2nd time, I can see how you were lost in a place so dark that only this voice could pull you back as you managed to bring all the pieces together at the end. I'll say this, it's a pretty unique piece in terms of how you wrote it! And very appropriately titled, too! Kee ponw ritin gon, BSbyBS! Thanks for sharing this, and have a really groovy day!
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