Hi Tonny,

I found your poem while searching for items of a psychological nature. The title grabbed my attention and was curious how 'fishes' would be incorporated. I was not disappointed. Your poem is deep, dark, and descriptive to the point that the reader can easily visualize the scenes.

This type of writing can only be done effectively by someone who has first-hand knowledge of the pain and torture associated with mental illness. I do hope that you are doing well and have found a good place to fall back on.

While I enjoyed reading your poem, it is sad and resonates deeply. Thank you for sharing your work with us; it is greatly appreciated.

Kindest Regards,
Lilli

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