Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose your poem from the read a newbie section. The title is what caught my interest

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the flow of this poem. It was very smooth and easy to read. I got from start to finish with very little effort and the poem painted a very clear mental image for me. I almost felt as if I was in the antique shop looking at things. It is a very unique but true look at these types of places.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem made me feel like I was at the location with the author. It reminded me of times I've gone browsing through antique shops.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall this poem was well written. There was little to trip me up and the words flowed well and carried me through the poem from start to finish. The imagery was good and I was able to visit the location in my mind. Good Job.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing. Feel free to stop by my Portfolio and read some of my work.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .